Competition entry

I hope this is all right doing two at once it was the only way I could work out to do it. Take the best . I had to re -write at the last minute for continuity and the number of speech bubbles which I cannot see while writing the script.
Please can I send in the drawn comics to your site when i get the scanner going and have drawn them, I will still attribute them and don't care if I don't get a prize.I'm still using cybercafes.I love dinosaurs and science fantasy, scouts and youthculture.

Coudn't submit without preview image so had to pick a random one-sorry!